tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post4086397298098524202..comments2024-03-29T00:35:02.880-07:00Comments on Visions of Other Worlds: A to Z Challenge: S is for SerendipityJessica Marcarellihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07975046888449182461noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-37215598112512215412012-04-24T10:20:23.121-07:002012-04-24T10:20:23.121-07:00Ooh that's a great start for a story! Really s...Ooh that's a great start for a story! Really sucked me in, I want to know what happens next! :)Laura Clipsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02748489198957473503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-86140579625500415672012-04-23T14:14:30.613-07:002012-04-23T14:14:30.613-07:00I love it! Please keep going!
Thanks for stopping...I love it! Please keep going!<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by my blog :) Glad to find another fellow writer on this a-z challenge!Britney Gulbrandsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03637618498524496363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-36339264245244775092012-04-23T13:30:57.037-07:002012-04-23T13:30:57.037-07:00My pleasure, Michelle! Thank *you* for your kind ...My pleasure, Michelle! Thank *you* for your kind words on the piece! <br /><br />I am collecting votes on finishing it... ;)Jessica Marcarellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07975046888449182461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-67572192486963708392012-04-23T13:24:16.986-07:002012-04-23T13:24:16.986-07:00Thanks for choosing my prompt, and for the generou...Thanks for choosing my prompt, and for the generous words in the bio above...<br /><br />Oooh I love the piece! It has just the right mix of mystery/suspense and humour... great dialogue too!<br />Mmmm, I don't like the sound of this Jonathan character... he strikes me as being creepy... just don't trust him one bit! But on the other hand, he could be a harmless flirt who is full of his own self-importance! You've got me wondering now...<br />Options... options... options...<br />I agree with the other bloggers, you will have to complete the story!michellehttp://writer-in-transit.co.za/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-29253808620898278122012-04-23T13:03:45.035-07:002012-04-23T13:03:45.035-07:00Thanks, Lynn - I might have to. :)Thanks, Lynn - I might have to. :)Jessica Marcarellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07975046888449182461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-77195199861200936922012-04-23T13:02:29.362-07:002012-04-23T13:02:29.362-07:00Thank you, Cheryl! I'm glad you enjoyed it.Thank you, Cheryl! I'm glad you enjoyed it.Jessica Marcarellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07975046888449182461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-14504130596204799842012-04-23T12:56:29.754-07:002012-04-23T12:56:29.754-07:00Cathy, you've made my day! Thank you! Unfort...Cathy, you've made my day! Thank you! Unfortunately, I have no answers myself, since I didn't think far past the short story...I am now, however. ;)Jessica Marcarellihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07975046888449182461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-18259203942922701542012-04-23T10:23:35.350-07:002012-04-23T10:23:35.350-07:00great writing---keep going :)great writing---keep going :)Lynn Proctorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349867270815243053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-28534798256056634652012-04-22T21:23:54.965-07:002012-04-22T21:23:54.965-07:00Jessica, I'm with Cathy! Good story writing!!...Jessica, I'm with Cathy! Good story writing!!!Cheryl Klarichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12633250643087095689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8344950345170466410.post-44527867696144459332012-04-22T10:49:06.883-07:002012-04-22T10:49:06.883-07:00JESSICA - you can't stop THERE... what's g...JESSICA - you can't stop THERE... what's gonna happen??? Why is her furniture in another town? Is Jonathan a good guy or an evil serial killer? So many questions! (And I only have questions when I've really enjoyed the story... so well, well done!!!)Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.com