12 April, 2012

A to Z Challenge: K is for Kindled

Today's flash fiction is part 2 of April's Thursday fantasy series. If you missed part 1: Energia (or just need a reminder), click HERE.

[EDIT: Kindled has been taken down, along with its flash siblings, for consideration in a print magazine. Thank you so much to those of you who read it and left such wonderful comments!]



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10 comments:

  1. StratPlayerCJF13 April, 2012 05:34

    Fabulous story, Jessica!I like how smoothly you create the tension in the scene and pull me in as a reader. Great work.

    And great blog too!!!! (and thank you for visiting and commenting on mine yesterday.)

    I nosed about here, and I must say I love your work. Excellent!

    And now I'm a new follower, too. ;^)

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    1. Jessica Marcarelli20 April, 2012 11:52

      Thanks, Chris! I love hearing that. And thanks for following! Will love to see you back.

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  2. Jamespchesley@gmail.com13 April, 2012 09:02

    I love the whole scene, but the first paragraph is my favorite. It definitely grabs my attention. Great work!

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  3. Anna Tan13 April, 2012 10:50

    So tragic. I was hoping Bryn & Siora were still alive.

    I've tagged you in the Lucky 7 meme here and am also now following you!

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    1. Jessica Marcarelli20 April, 2012 11:58

      Aw, now I feel bad for killing them off. But Caolainn survived, so that should cheer you up! :)

      Thanks! I'll have to do it after April, but I'll put it up then.

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  4. michelle17 April, 2012 14:12

    A great story... love the concept of energia.
    Good job!

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    1. Jessica Marcarelli20 April, 2012 11:59

      Thanks, Michelle! I'm happy you stopped in for a read!

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  5. A Girl and Her eBooks20 April, 2012 11:14

    You are so talented!

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    1. Jessica Marcarelli20 April, 2012 11:59

      Aw, thank you, Amy. It means a lot when I hear that. :)

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